You seriously need to learn about scansion. Also, rhyming on an unstressed syllable (as you do with 'ing') in a limerick is pretty lame. :p
This is a bit better:
There once was a team from Iberia, The strongest by any criteria! Their strikers did miss As they lost to the Swiss And they'll now get some time in Siberia.
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Date: 2010-06-16 11:34 pm (UTC)This is a bit better:
There once was a team from Iberia,
The strongest by any criteria!
Their strikers did miss
As they lost to the Swiss
And they'll now get some time in Siberia.